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Pauline's avatar

Great story with quirky characters Pauline Doherty

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Peter Cottrill's avatar

Love this story. The characters are wonderful. Cynthia is convincingly scary and I recognise Stan. Tony seems very familiar! Can you use a different title for the story, would be great if it implied the comic strangeness within the plot

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K.B. Cottrill's avatar

Thanks for the comment Pete. I will have a think about the title!

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